Uh...
Well, the preloader and the opening animation were very good. Very well done.
The rest of the animation, however...
Well, for starters, it's barely an animation. Just a little arrow moving back and forth. And a pineapple with a picture of a catapult in it? Just...no.
And you can't hear anything being said. Or you can't make it out because the voice is so high.
In other words, put a little more effort into it, please. Thanks!
Ta!
Previews don't go here? wat?
I disagree. People do previews on Newgrounds all the time. Dorks.
anyways, on to the show. The background was really distracting, but that might just be me and my neurotic mind. The plot didn't really...make sense. I couldn't really pick it up. The animation was pretty good, and the art.
Ta!
Well, it wasn't...terrible
It's kind of dumb though. The animation was pretty good, especially the mouth animation. But the movement needs some work. The background was also pretty good, though. But it was a bit short. And nothing much really happened.
Uh, and I like that you take the time to respond, though I disagree with some of what you've said.
But still, it'd be nice to have a little more happening. Maybe stuff going on in the background or something.
Good luck!
Guys...just stop
If you want to smoke, that's just fine. But we reserve the right to make fun of your idiocy. No need to get your panties in a twist just because we want to make fun of people who kill themselves.
And the animation was okay. Not great, but okay.
Rorschach
He's friend to the animals.
It's true! I read the book!
I love this. Especially since the dogs are the same kind as in the book.
THEY'RE ALL SNAKES
Is any part of this a reference to David Icke, perchance? Anyways, this was awesome.
Heartbreaking
It was beautiful. That's all I can think to say. The tragic childhood, his realization of his dream, rise and fall, and his passing of the torch. It was...wow.
Interesting
I liked it a lot.
But what got me was the texture of the background. Is that paper towel or something?
Yep, the background is a piece of papertowel and the ground was a green towel :)
Glad you enjoyed it!
I'm a mighty pirate and stuff... Yeah.
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